Thursday, August 31, 2006

Do I Go For It? Comments

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I sat there my head bowed in dejection
It had been a long search
But now that it was ended
I did not know what to do with what I had in my hand
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Mpho Petrus Manwedi
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Dee Daffodil 20 September 2006

Mpho....Noooooooo! Please don't...the last line, captures the whole essence of the poem...Up until that point, I was cheerfully being led down the garden path! What a shocker! ! Please stick around. Hugs, dee

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Sean North 31 August 2006

Mpho stiring images Chomi.. you continue to provoke the mind most thoughtfully,

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