Do I Care That You Are Hurting? Comments

You have written layers of angst and regret in this powerful rant against your narcissist. Love the use of repetition and the slightly unwieldy structure of your penning. It certainly works for me. Excellent poem. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

This came across as something still in progress, I don't mean the poem, I mean that in-between place where we search and hopefully find some threads that keep us going in the right dirrection, You have expressed yourself so well, that it made me think about how I must try harder to be more genuine and honest with others, , All the very best Lawrence Oh yeah and sorry that you didn't appear to recieve my e-mail It was a clip I would have liked you to have watched on Youtube about a film called POWDER and it was sound tracked by Sarah Brightman All the best Love for you and your closest Love duncan X