1- Raat ki tanhai mein uska paigham,
Mujh mein jeene ki ek aas jaga deta hai,
Rooh ke zakhm bhi hanste hain ujaale ban kar,
Talab-e-zeest bhi koi badha deta hai.
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Your both poem are great and full of emotions. Your language is really simple but your sentiments create a kind rapture. Nice poems
Bahut achaiy. ahsaas-e-umeed hee ulfat ko jilaa daitaa haiy aap kee urdu shairee bahut achhee haiy. Is maiN ehsaas kee gehraii kaiy elawa jazbaat kaa dilchasp andaaz nazar aataa haiy. Likhtaiy rahee aiy.