Saturday, January 8, 2011

Do Ehsas Comments

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1- Raat ki tanhai mein uska paigham,
Mujh mein jeene ki ek aas jaga deta hai,
Rooh ke zakhm bhi hanste hain ujaale ban kar,
Talab-e-zeest bhi koi badha deta hai.
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir
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Tasadduq Hussain, Ejaz 17 April 2011

Bahut achaiy. ahsaas-e-umeed hee ulfat ko jilaa daitaa haiy aap kee urdu shairee bahut achhee haiy. Is maiN ehsaas kee gehraii kaiy elawa jazbaat kaa dilchasp andaaz nazar aataa haiy. Likhtaiy rahee aiy.

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Mohammad Muzzammil 12 January 2011

Your both poem are great and full of emotions. Your language is really simple but your sentiments create a kind rapture. Nice poems

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir

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Bahraich, U.P. India
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