Friday, May 17, 2013
Do Dreams Speak? Comments
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Will you give some more time?
for sweet dreams to grow.
What to expect from a mundane life?
a naive child at heart doesn't know.
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Paul Brookes
18 May 2013
I like this poem but the first stanza doesn't sit right the rhyme is clumsy. All in all a good effort 9/10 BB : O)
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9/10/2025 8:43:16 PM # 1.0.0
Till dream come true dreaming as you have mentioned in the poem can't be stopped and will grow more and more till desire of heart is fulfilled in life!