Saturday, June 7, 2008

[divorce] Of Mummy And Daddy Comments

Rating: 4.5

You,
you told me it was better this way,
That You and daddy were better apart,
That daddy and mummy,
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Jess Terry
COMMENTS
Indira Renganathan 22 June 2009

Extremely painful..I can feel your hurt heart....I can only promise you that I pray and wish 'God be with you' ever to give you peace

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Dr. Kolitha Lelwala 12 January 2009

Oh what a painful poem.... Well, faced the reality.... wonderful poem, With love, Kolitha

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This poem is rich with reality.I feel the pain and brokenness. Very touching.You write very well for your age. Let me know what you think of my poem 'I Choose the Mountain 8/10

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Ershad Mazumder 05 October 2008

Drink your passion. Poetry is not reporting.10 for your sentiment and emotion.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 10 September 2008

A sentimental composition, touches noiselessly. Nice.

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Jun Insigne 23 July 2008

it's happened many times, but keep up the good work, Take care....

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Jessica Rose 20 June 2008

seven years in september this year....

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angelianne 1012 18 June 2008

i went through the same situation and i know it sucks..but u gotta stay strong..i wish u all the best and i really think that u got a talent in writing...keep it up! ! !

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Emily Henson 11 June 2008

I am sorry you had to go through this, it sounds terrible, but one thing you told me is SMILE, IT was beautifully written and i can tell you have a real passion and talent for poetry

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Lee Sharon 07 June 2008

i'm sorry for this poem...

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