You,
you told me it was better this way,
That You and daddy were better apart,
That daddy and mummy,
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Oh what a painful poem.... Well, faced the reality.... wonderful poem, With love, Kolitha
This poem is rich with reality.I feel the pain and brokenness. Very touching.You write very well for your age. Let me know what you think of my poem 'I Choose the Mountain 8/10
Drink your passion. Poetry is not reporting.10 for your sentiment and emotion.
it's happened many times, but keep up the good work, Take care....
i went through the same situation and i know it sucks..but u gotta stay strong..i wish u all the best and i really think that u got a talent in writing...keep it up! ! !
I am sorry you had to go through this, it sounds terrible, but one thing you told me is SMILE, IT was beautifully written and i can tell you have a real passion and talent for poetry
Extremely painful..I can feel your hurt heart....I can only promise you that I pray and wish 'God be with you' ever to give you peace