Divorce - Another Matter Of Course (The Storm Brews) Comments

yes, i do understand that divorce is becoming an answer to many problems and relationships, but your poem..... i mean u sound so bias, if we'd continue to think like we'd still be in cave man days....newsflash there are a lot of single parent families that are happy, where the woman is the single parent not becuz the husband died but becuz of divorce......sometimes divorce is needed some ppl just don't need to be together but they might just be finding that out so i c what your saying but at times divorce is necessary okay youth doesn't always equal ignorance, stupidity, and selfishness in many cases we hold more wisdom than u could even dream of....so yeah ur poem's nice and it's free flowing- if that's what u want to call it but u still dont hit the underlying truth- so before u start to criticize get your facts straight okay

Even though this poem does say a lot...there is much more beneath it's surface that can be spotted, read-in, for it does have an undercurrent. Not just the tumultous El Nino on the surface. We all came from the water...shouldn't we be able to wed El Nino, direct it's faults into virtue...for some parts of it is, indeed virtuous. The good and the bad...one does not exist without the other in the background. The marriage, in reality...it's storms and serenity. HIGHLY interesting read! ! Good going, Daniel! ! ! xxElysabeth

Thank you for the comment you left on my poem! After reading yours and seeing how brilliant it was, I started to wonder why you left that comment on my poem! Great write.

Sins are a part of life, just like betrayal is a part of love. It could never be any other way- we're human. No amount of religion, morals, beliefs, or 'love' is going to change us from the selfish creatures we are. Everything we do, however underlying, the reason we do it is to benefit and please OURSELVES. I understand the point you're making, you seem to know what you're talking about. I can't say I agree with everything you've just said, however.

wow! this poem hit me hard! i've been there, so i do understand. outstanding poem!