Saturday, July 26, 2008

Divorce Comments

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A bond of love has brought them together
love made them known each other.
round metals splitted in both hands
shown as signs of eternal stand
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Godspower Oshodin
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goodbye my love they both say as they go farewell song, neighbors sing also. painful departure as they stand separated.... very good wrote i appriciate it....10 read mine divoprce, no separate ways.... buterflies around and mary to marry

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Ashraful Musaddeq 08 September 2008

A nice poem on divorce with the nice concluding 'goodbye my love they both say as they go farewell song, neighbors sing also.'.

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Blessing Nanier 04 August 2008

woah, this is soo. i don't even know what to say.it is written with such talent and care

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Carol Rhodes 03 August 2008

THIS, AGAIN, EASILY DISPLAYS THE BRILLIANCE OF THE WRITER. NOT 'SIMPLY' WRITTEN, BY ANY MEANS, BECAUSE SO MUCH OF HIS ERUDITE PRESENTATION IS COMPLEX. WAS IT THE COMBINING OF THE TWO RACES, THE OBJECTIONS BY MANY OUTSIDE THE MARRIAGE, THE CULTURAL INFLUENCE, THAT DOOMED THE COUPLE? IN AMERICA, ONLY RECENTLY, WE HAVE MANY MULTI-CULTURAL UNIONS. WHY NOT? WE'RE ALL BROTHERS UNDER THE SKIN. PLUS, THE COMBINATION OF RACES IN THE CHILDREN MAKES THEM TRULY EXQUISITE. THANK YOU, GODSPOWER. YOUR MIND IS A TREASURE! ! ! CAROL

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Godspower Oshodin

Godspower Oshodin

Lagos Nigeria
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