Divorce Comments

A very good fantasy like it thanks for sharing dear.

A marvellous poem, I added 10.

Very well done. An excellent read.

good luck with life. it can be hard at times but we know with patience rewards will also come.

a very good composition...selected words beautifully arrnged...congrats, amir...

The ability to dust yourself off and move on....the light (a spirit now free) ...excellently penned...with amazing emotion...strength. Thanks Persian, you never fail..in putting your message across my friend regards Jon

I like the tension created between the 'heavy' first stanza + first line of the second one and 'light' hope finally found out in the last three lines. It describes very well the tearing between a dark necessary situation and the way hope driving to new expectations. An intense write. 10

This light source a new course to follow, no remorse from divorce - tomorrow! *10*! ! Great read! ! Best regards, Friend Thad

A nicely written piece, sometimes divorce is the only answer when marriages fail, sad but true,10 Lynda xx