Wednesday, August 2, 2006

Diving Comments

Rating: 2.7

I take a breath.
My heart flutters as it begins.
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Ebone' Ingram
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Ebone' Ingram 07 August 2006

Hello, readers...[man, I feel awkward writing a comment on my own poem...] Anywho, I just wanted to say that in case you didn't know, this poem is actually about a 1st kiss, not exactly about diving, that's just what it felt like. So...yeah. Eni da Kid

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Dee Daffodil 04 August 2006

Very intriguing poem...it's a beautiful world down there...even better with the right person...sorry you miss him...might you be re-united soon? Hugs, Dee

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