Diving Into The Waters Of Un-Consciousness Comments
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When the younger years grinned at your dreams,
You ignored them, —and you dived as a dolphin,
Into the waters of your un-consciousness;
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This poem took me to a trance. 'You are the stoic dolphin ever awake, ever swimming With the currents of life…slippery and supple: Shaping the water—never shaped by water itself! You are the ‘cold-blooded' fish of visions and allusions! ' - Wonderful!
A magnificent piece of work with a captivating title! I took the chance to dive differently into 4 pools that you have created! Relished my bath in your last pool! An outstanding composition....Top score!
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8/6/2025 10:50:43 PM # 1.0.0
it's all through a loving poem I think..........there are many facts of life