Friday, October 16, 2009

Diving Comments

Rating: 5.0

Lift up your arm and grab the next bar
Pull yourself up, put your foot on the other bar
Climb the ladder
To the top
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Timothy Venard
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7he N0153 4nd 7he Fur9 15 January 2010

You show great potential as a writer Timothy, keep it up mate, this poem is excellent! ! !

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