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its a lovely poem it gives hope to the hopeless

Desperate quest for success is finally met and it is the beauty of this write!

Great poem, Vijai. I love the ending. very inspiring

Beautiful poem. When we keep our eyes wide open (probably brain) , opportunities are unlimited. It's like stars in sky, we have to scale, just, the Terrace to view. Wait for the cloud to remove veil, all disappointments will vanish. I write this, that all our expressions reflect our true inner feelings. I write every expressions literally. I take every expressions literally. Nice expressions.

Your poetry is wonderfully full and alive, you give strong and intense feelings and emotions, your visual wording is well done. This is a wonderful poem, very intense. thanks for sharing Michael

Another wonderful piece to add to your collection. My favorite line... This moment is never permanent in life. Thank You Izzey Strange

I heard you! Very well said! Awaiting for another Devine shower!

Fantastic.Torments, tortures are part of our life but God is always kind to gift something, to take it in our stride, in order to get over the moment of agony--be it optimism, be it a new friend or whatever.Very well written.

interesting poem, nice symbolistic expressions, thank you for sharing..........

Words usage is elegant! ! ! But the ending stanzacould have been made more clear..10 + for your poetic aptitude! !

This poem was just brillant i loved it, it was wonderful keep up the good work :)

there is no life without hope and there is no hope without life... ups and downs that's life... when you're in a tunnel surely you will glance a ray this is the HOPE, he asks for you to run and run and run until you reach the SUN... your DIVINE SHOWERS is well expressed!

I got up saying to myself there's always another chance......So True n so inspirational....Wonderful poetic diction.10+

This is refreshing poetic rain that emerges out of the dark cloud of torment. I really like this poem.

Dear Vijay, Thanks for your invite. It's a good poem. The message is loud and clear.Choice of words and rhythm is perfectly maintained.I feel two changes will make the flow of your poem better, this is just a suggestion, choice is yours, In L-14-'-Is there anyone who could hear' may be changed to-'Is there anybody there? ' In L-19-'I thanked my heavenly friend' to 'I thanked Heaven' I liked the poem. rated at 9. keep on writing Rajkumar

Good poem Good composition. Divine showers here Enjoyed reading it Thanks for sharing with me

i like the way the words flow, well done dear, thanks for sharing

Good composition but if I am not mistaken the rain hides my tears but not my fears okay anyway good poem. Nice meter.

I liked it...nice poem...nicely composed...

Divine showers nice poem.10 out of 10