Monday, January 15, 2007

Divine Seclusion! Comments

Rating: 5.0

As she dances upon thin wire
That had Ravel within my mind
And unfurls the steps she takes
Unto the mystic of the dark.
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Geoff Warden
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Dee Daffodil 23 January 2007

Love the last two lines...says it all...yet aagain...lovely poem! Hugs, Dee

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Diane Violet 17 January 2007

Wonderful write Geoff, especially like the last line................................Diane

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Original Unknown Girl 16 January 2007

Sometimes a little divine intervention can help with seclusion! this is a fine write Geoff. HG: -) xx

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Frank James Ryan, Jr. 16 January 2007

nATURE BROOUGHT TO LIFE ON-LINE...VERY WELL CRAFTED WORK, SIR GEOFF, INDEED... FJR

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