Tuesday, November 26, 2013

Divine Nature Comments

Rating: 5.0

In the pitched darkness of night
When silence walks with heavy feet
The lantern of hope weaves its bright
Strands through the somber dark sheet
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Yasmin Khan
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Hira Akhtar 19 January 2014

amazing scene you presented through your poem... :) loved it hira

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Saadat Tahir 07 December 2013

a lovely and charming ode to nature. great rhyme great flow fab imagery poetic merit high lovely-liked

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Ibnu Din Assingkiri 05 December 2013

...powerful imagery. indeed a lovely poem. thanks for sharing.

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Heather Wilkins 02 December 2013

beautiful poem nice imagery

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Valsa George 30 November 2013

'My heart sails with the silver dinghy in the auroral seas' Reading this poem, my heart too sails in the sea of delight! Beautiful description of morning! !

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Sallam Yassin 29 November 2013

cream from your soul rhyme in communion with divine nature

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 29 November 2013

soul in communion with Divine Nature Poem that touches the soul. Beautiful. Thank you.

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Musfiq Us Shaleheen 28 November 2013

its not only a divine nature also a divine heart.. i loved it very....10/10

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Noreen Carden 26 November 2013

Wow this is beautiful a lovely read well done i enjoyed reading very much

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Kanav Justa 26 November 2013

can smell the aroma of nature in your poem, , , , wonderful poem, ,

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