Sunday, November 18, 2018

Divine Love Comments

Rating: 4.8

As the bee searches for the nectar
I search for you, my beloved
When night wears her robe
I dress up myself for you
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Susheela Alexiose
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Dr. Antony Theodore 11 August 2023

There's so much to give and only give.. This the depiction of true love. great poem. tony

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Sandra Feldman 02 December 2018

You write beautifully, expressing and transmitting great feeling.

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T.Rajesh 21 November 2018

This is a great write effusing the song of love energetically.

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Jaya J 19 November 2018

Wow I love your poems but this one has taken a notch up. Really beautiful

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Anil Kumar Panda 19 November 2018

A beautiful poem on love and first night really. Very nicely crafted with an amazing flow. Thanks for sharing.

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Dr Antony Theodore 19 November 2018

We find shelter in each other's arms There's so much to give and only give And get lost in our own world. to be lost in union which is unforgettable. thank you for beginning to write romantic poems.. write well and u will get a lot of friends.

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Dev Anand 19 November 2018

Nectar and the bees, flowers, butterflies flying down and sitting on the flowers. dressing up myself for you in the depth of the night. perfumed i n myrrah and Frankincense so that you may be lost in my scent in my cavities and love me more because of my beauty. a wonderful sensual poem with a divine touch. dev

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Bernard F. Asuncion 19 November 2018

Dear Susheela, such a lovely write......10++++++++++++++

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