As the bee searches for the nectar
I search for you, my beloved
When night wears her robe
I dress up myself for you
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You write beautifully, expressing and transmitting great feeling.
Wow I love your poems but this one has taken a notch up. Really beautiful
A beautiful poem on love and first night really. Very nicely crafted with an amazing flow. Thanks for sharing.
We find shelter in each other's arms There's so much to give and only give And get lost in our own world. to be lost in union which is unforgettable. thank you for beginning to write romantic poems.. write well and u will get a lot of friends.
Nectar and the bees, flowers, butterflies flying down and sitting on the flowers. dressing up myself for you in the depth of the night. perfumed i n myrrah and Frankincense so that you may be lost in my scent in my cavities and love me more because of my beauty. a wonderful sensual poem with a divine touch. dev
Dear Susheela, such a lovely write......10++++++++++++++
There's so much to give and only give.. This the depiction of true love. great poem. tony