Friday, April 18, 2008

Divine Intervention Comments

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I am but a vessel,
seamless without a leak.
No escape possible,
contained to this belief.
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David Desantis 19 April 2008

very powerful stuff man. I liked the desolate landscape imagery. We all are vessels in one way or another..

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Abha Sharma 18 April 2008

thought provoking metaphor.. life is bounded by desires and will...well expressed

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