Divine Intervention Comments

Tenderly and thoughtfully written. A nice piece, thank you Annie.

I have a fondness for the elderly. Thank you for this write. Its very caring.

Out of the window, the Sun says goodbye 'I'll come back tomorrow to warm you and your life' I love dat verse...keep writting yh

Well done! You must have had such a build up of words in that brilliant mind of yours to write so much so fast! The only shame is that you waited till now to get them out of your head and into the world: -) . Thanks for being brave and sharing. Keep up the writing. DK

i love this poem.. well done! !

Very well done! I could see a visual image of all of this happening in my head.

Very nicly done Amanda, very well written, I like this alot :)

This is like an invisible dream that keeps this person alive. I thought iot would be death at the end. You brought an unpredictable end and it was a poem well done.

yes very visual, and makes me a little scared of being old and alone

Ananda... I agree with david on this one... great write..10

Ananda a most profound write about loneliness and old age. Very visual in its telling. Beautiful write. Top Marks from me, thanks for sharing it my friend. David