Thou art the nature
and me like a seedling
want to be engrossed
from where i am sprouted
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As an atheist to the core, I cannot approve your theme here Mr Ramesh Rai. I congratulate your diction and style. Please, write about man and life and I shall respond much as you desire.
your last stanza so telling. a lovely read. we are all the nature of GOD
It describes the Greatness of the God(i.e.profound nature of the God) . Through this poem, the poet wants to be engrossed/embraced in the origin(i.e. God) from where he has sprouted/borne. The poet also desires to submerge his worldly displeasure into the God's soul (i.e. origin of the nature) . In the last para, the poet compares himself with a new baby and wants to overlap in the mother's soul and sublime in the Greatness of GOD. A very good poem.
you Poet described one part of the within paradise! ! ! ! ! No matters what God is, they pleasure is given to us with so love and equally! ! ! Muito Lindo! ! !
comment by Swami Ashwini Bharati for this poem on facebook 'Yes, Ramesh, that is the whole story..... the whole message of all the scriptures- - - the whole effort of all the sages to make us (The Seeds) aware of our life's pinnacle (to bloom into fully fragrant flowers) that can be realized only by letting ourselves dissolve and disappear into The Divine Embracement.... Thank you, Ramesh for this divine sharing! '