You gave away your life
You feared to take it any more
You always prayed for happiness
Only to find pain in my store
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Very good poem but the real love starts when both try to extend themselves for the spritual growth of the beloved. Real charm is when the fire of love is equally burning in both hearts. Very good write.
Your heart craved for dew Stubborn for someone you wanted You missed the one who loved you...thats true, we get obsessed wth finding that particular perfect soul, when there's nothing like that.And when someone try to give us all of their heart we bussy with our obsession that we hardly notice them until they gone...thats why we will never be happy but always regretful.nice one Preetam.
You cried you were lonely Your heart craved for dew Stubborn for someone you wanted You missed the one who loved you. How very true! We all go in search of Heaven far and wide when Heaven seems to be just around us!
tht was very touching and sad wondeful job 10++++ keep up great work