Saturday, April 2, 2016

Divine Comments

Rating: 5.0

Free lunches is a not,
Forget not what we brought,
We are here to make a change,
Good thoughts is what we exchange.
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Deepak Calyampoondi
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Dr Antony Theodore 25 June 2017

Wonderful endings of the lines How much time you would have spend to write like that. is to give that light, world will call you divine. nothing so noble in war and cry, be their guiding angel so many points i collected from your poem after reading it carefully. So many good points. You are a good moralist and spiritual in your views. Thank u for spreading such ideas. Thank you.

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Dev Anand 25 June 2017

Wonderful endings of the lines How much time you would have spend to write like that. is to give that light, world will call you divine. nothing so noble in war and cry, be their guiding angel so many points i collected from your poem after reading it carefully. So many good points. You are a good moralist and spiritual in your views. Thank u for spreading such ideas. Thank you. tony

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Be kind to your enemies to win the race, a good poem.

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Be kind to your enemies to win the race, a nice thought, a good poem.

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