Saturday, October 13, 2007

Divided Comments

Rating: 2.3

Rebel terror factions need not worry
U.S. a wide divide we can proclaim
Killer attack bomb plots need not hurry
Our own a rift at home may now inflame
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Anna Pacheco
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Greenwolfe 1962 03 August 2008

I don't know who gave low scores on this one, but they are wrong. The rhymes were quite good. The flow of the poem, while not perfect, was no real problem. I find nothing here not to recommend. GW62

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Dwayne Bailey 02 December 2007

Is'nt that the truth. A House devided cannot stand. We do need to unite and stay that way. Nice write.

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Anna Pacheco

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