By walking days
Tirelessly on the months' cycle
Yet completing another year circle
For another run ready to come
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nice poem. yes, keep hunting, and let other hunting too. :) stay blessed in every moment of preseni
My unwritten story! ! Of life; and, about my life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
The relationship between life and time is fantastically brought out. Nothing is lost but we can fulfill all dreams of life this time, if not during the next interval of time. This poem teaches us lot of patience and gives hope to be always friendly with moving time. Nice work: -)
So beautiful and full of meaning Sometimes though you need to stand still to know where your'e running to or from Nice write BB : O)
Life wandering, life wondering....peace and harmony! Happy journey wise one...Nice poem.
Beautiful poem Soul, full of meaning and very thought-provoking.
Neither one wants, you can not give up. Human nature drives us ever forward. Even in small steps. TFS Soul!
Such a philosophical poem rendered in beautiful words which is for every person.A CAPTIVATING WRITE.
not too sure what to say, its really entrancing to be honest, captures you and bring to the front your own fears and anxieties, great poem.
So much meaning and thought in your work your are such a thoughtful caring Soul. I feel I can hear you speak these words.
the contrast between the light and darkness! A new year has come Yet old dreams to hunt................................!
the contrast between the light and darkness! A new year has come Yet old dreams to hunt................................!
unseen future has come and we get a step closer to our end line.that s why a new year frightens us.the present moment is like an edge between past and future.we have to take care not to fall in to each side.not think about past and not be afraid of future too much.live in the moment. it is a little bit regrettable.a season of our lives is closed and a new one is begun.but we must know that Time waites for nobody neither me nor you buddy we have to take care of our souls so pursuit in life our goals some day we see that our lives are rolled by and we see how fast it becomes last. nice poem soul.lots of fresh impressive feelings it gave me.brilliant one ~nb
pages of light and the dark! This poem is written based on the concept of light and the book. Beautiful and I enjoyed reading this poem!
Soul, I adore your positive attitude to life and all.This is the thing we need most and we lack also.More and more is nothing but the hedonism which makes us mournful if we don't get the cherished things.Thanks for focusing on this theme. Best Wishes H.H
A second ago The night has closed The end of another chapter A new second now Time delivers another chapter Anew one in unfolded paper To be written on secrecy of future In three hunderd sixty five pages With lights and dark, days and nights With the ink of mystery, unwritten to eyes Our adventure to go and to be experienced imaginative, a bit soulful and montage captured very well cheers
I can resonate with the feel of this poem- the piquancy between regret and expectation - thank you
We should not bother for the past. We mustn't keep mourning, better to keep haunting. We may get our fruits in future. Dear Soul, you have nicely and astutely inscribed this poem on a philosophical ground that readers will appreciate. Here I quote... . What we've lost in past We've never return again For the dreams that broken We must claim back to the future The lost we had, The gain we will have In a new opening days what we gain we shall cheers A day for no give up before the chapter changed again I wont surrender, no i wont Thanks for sharing this valuable poem.