Wednesday, September 9, 2020

Diversity Comments

Rating: 5.0

The word will settle like a leaf
Upon your palm. The word
Is love and think how many
Veins subtend from central
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Tom Billsborough
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Bri Edwards 30 October 2024

Unfortunately Tom died according to another (closer to Tom) PH friend. AND it happened I think the same year several others 'left' PH, but not all to Death I believe.: (

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Bri Edwards 30 October 2024

(continued) DISSIPATE: 2 - 'squander or fritter away (money, energy, or resources) . 'he had dissipated his entire fortune' '

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Bri Edwards 30 October 2024

(cont.) DISSIPATE: 1 - (with reference to a feeling or other intangible thing) disappear or cause to disappear. 'the concern she'd felt for him had wholly dissipated' ' (CONT.)

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Bri Edwards 30 October 2024

'The word will settle like a snowflake On your palm. The word is love' BE FOREWARNED: like a snowflake on ones palm, love can and often does melt/evaporate/dissipate/shrink/'go away'. (cont.)

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Bri Edwards 30 October 2024

The word 'love' to me should be broken into several words with similar, but not the exact same, meanings. Words like 'enjoy', 'crave', ' after', 'like strongly', 'worship'. You know: all those feelings women have for ME! ! ! : ) BRI

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Bri Edwards 30 October 2024

Oh! ! I think I meant stanza 3, not 2, in my last comment, though I sort of/kind of/in a way/to some extent like # 2 as well. ;) bri

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Bri Edwards 30 October 2024

'nofrenzied'? ? ? That's a new word for me! ! Ah! ! The 2nd stanza seems to be in support of a variety of sexual/emotional preferences in choosing ones lover/mate etc. Bravo! !

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Bri Edwards 30 October 2024

(cont.) '(in) BOTANY (of a bract) extend under (a flower) so as to support or enfold it. ...' I thought you were talkin' about a LEAF. : )

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Bri Edwards 30 October 2024

Tom, 'subtend'? ? I think you may be 'close but no cigar' on your usage; I had to look this up: (cont.)

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Bri Edwards 30 October 2024

Tom,

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Bri Edwards 30 October 2024

Tom, if you can speak from your 'afterlife', please tell me that this poem is NOT an acrostic poem! ! ! : ) bri [[ you are missed, by someone; I'm sure ]] RIP

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M. Asim Nehal 28 January 2024

I voted this poem but didn't leave my comments, Yes only Love remains even after we are gone.

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Bri Edwards 30 October 2024

Yes you DID, M. Asim! ! ! It IS there, next to your photo. See it? ? !

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Susan Williams 17 January 2021

GORGEOUS! ! But what I want to know is if you are still here? ? ? ? ? ? ?

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Bri Edwards 11 September 2020

stanza 1: i can't decide if you are talkin' 'bout a leaf, a human hand, or " love" . hmm? stanza 3: " no frenzied voices" or " nonfrenzied voices" ? I'll bet " no frenzied" . 100 £? Bet? I like what i feel you are trying to say. Diversity in sexual 'orientation' is about " Pathways which we are bound to follow." bri :) thanks for sharing.

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Dr John Bryson 09 September 2020

A master poet resurrected.

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Deluke Muwanigwa 09 September 2020

Beautifully penned. Agreed. We should not be quick to judge things we do not create. The Boeing 737 Max we can compare with Airbus A320 neo cause we made it. Life and God's creations ah ah! Not our calling. Great poem

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Tom Billsborough

Tom Billsborough

Preston Lancashire England
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