Saturday, May 19, 2012

Divergence Comments

Rating: 4.4

Which one day my divergence will tenacitied? ? ?
Being chased by grim belief & nostalgia of sting

With luminous eyes & notion in mind, , , , , ,
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Farah Ilyas
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Sallam Yassin 28 June 2013

great message of love As Allah created For love not for hate we enlightened with your divine message thanks

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Jahan Zeb 10 June 2013

Very strong language. The theme is grand and the message is conveyed in a nice flow. It's helping.

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Yasmin Khan 11 May 2013

Divine supremacy of love makes us to conquer over sacrament of society....a beautiful theme!

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Mohammad Muzzammil 10 June 2012

Nice poem having pretty lines and it also has fine imagery.

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Unwritten Soul 10 June 2012

Wonderful and strong projection in few lines, that's really cool and it really a strong poem! keep it up and thanks for inviting! ! :) _Unwritten Soul

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Alex Medina 09 June 2012

Very deep. So deep I'm still digging!

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Kasia Fedyk 09 June 2012

This is fantastic Farah! I love it. it is deep and love always prevails. Thanks

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Raja Nosherwan 09 June 2012

A strong and prosperous poem, you have strong emotions. Keep writing.

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Captain Cur 08 June 2012

Admit each other as we are, A beautiful ending to this poem Thoughtful and strong

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Rodney Vali 08 June 2012

I enjoyed reading this poem, great write

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Oludipe Oyin Samuel 08 June 2012

Whoooa. You're an enjoyable poet. I love your syntax, they're of authority. Really nice.

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Wahab Abdul 19 May 2012

good write, i enjoyed

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Farah Ilyas

Farah Ilyas

Faisalabad, Pakistan
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