Friday, October 4, 2019

Ditch & Life Poem ….[ Bri's Truck Driving Job; ' Requested ' By Valsa George Of Poem Hunter Fame ] Comments

Rating: 5.0

My very good friend, V. George, was told a tale by me "of late"….
(aka "recently") , a story of an event in my life near 50 years ago.
There was a reason the story (about a ditch) , to "V", I did relate.
I'll now relate it to YOU all; pardon me ….IF the relating's slow!
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Savita Tyagi 14 October 2019

I admire your ability Bri for creating wonderful rhyme from life's happenings. Reading your poem I was remindind of my husband sliding in the snowy ditch with his car and waiting for help. Yes those were the days of no cells....

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 12 October 2019

A fascinating story that vividly depicts how we can cope with a mishap on the road. You are lucky, Bri that it was not that tragic accident. Great imagery and nice rhyme.

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Bharati Nayak 11 October 2019

Sometimes I wonder how you can find a rhyme even when in snowy condition. See , how you made a struck truck into a poem!

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Paul Brookes 09 October 2019

Oh Bri great write as always you take the path not trodden and end up at the best place great piece enjoyed thanks

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Valsa George 06 October 2019

I never even dreamt that you would turn your story of falling into a ditch into a poem so fast! However you have done it on my request and I feel honored! Thanks a lot Bri.... dear good friend! Let me repeat once again..... you'll survive any hard situation in life as you have so much of resilience.....!

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Bri Edwards 04 October 2019

dear Bri, GREAT POEM, Bri! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! i usually i give your poems all 10s, but this one i will give a 14! ! ! bri :) thought i was ready to submit my poem, which i'd typed on 'Microsoft Word" , but once i copied and pasted into the PH 'submit a new poem'-page. i ended up editing it a lot to shorten the lines. i think it came out pretty well. ' bri :)

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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 October 2019

V. George, is a name of high fame and she is very good friend of ours. We love her and respect her. Communication through poetry is her art. This is a brilliant poem very well penned.10

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Valsa George 06 October 2019

Thank you Kumaramani sir for your high opinion of me! I feel greatly humbled!

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