Friday, December 1, 2017

Disturbing Signs Of The Times Comments

Rating: 3.3

Fathomless the pain
In the wake of life's duress-
Amidst all the hurt
And undue brokenness.
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Walterrean Salley
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ray schreiber 01 December 2017

I liked this poem... one suggestion, I would end with the third stanza. -ray

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Walterrean Salley 16 February 2018

Thank you Ray. Actually, I agonized over that very thing. I plan to change it when I have the time. Be blessed.

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Walterrean Salley 16 February 2018

Thanks Ray. I agonized over that very thing. Plan to change it, time permits.

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Abhimanyu Kumar.s 01 December 2017

It's all happening because we are going against nature. Good one

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Walterrean Salley 16 February 2018

True. Thanks Abhimanyu. My best to you.

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Walterrean Salley 16 February 2018

True. Thanks Abhimanyu.

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