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Hi Kezang, A poem on the woes of being orphaned. Heart-rending. Exquisite poem, on hurt imposed by fate. Nobody to complain to. The entities who one would look up to in agony- the parents and God Almighty- have easily/readily abandoned the child. The question remains: Whose fault? No wonder, the poem is selected poem of the day!
Even a life in living in darkness is yet better than no life! Be faithful there is hope for the living!
You might have undergone some trauma or a tragic phase at some point of time, but the fact that you are here as a gifted poet in the company of so many others, makes you unique. Why I was born in this world / Into a broken home? / I wish I could have died Before leaving the womb / My life is a jock: a living tomb.
your heart is in distress may be but you have overcome it skillfully....it is also the gift of god planted in you... a poem for many poems....... very special congratulations for member poet you deserve...
Haunting questions life throws upon us. We all are touched by it one way or other. You found a great way to express it. Thanks for sharing.
Don't lose your heart. There is always hope for everyone. Nice write. Deeply emotional.
Living without light! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Cong. my friend, u r a great star. I am pleased to note your life. u r xlent. never look back. i like to have a long conversation with you due to your delighted life. my email and face book is given in my profile. keep it up.
..may be u were born to write..life is the most beautiful gift that God has bestowed upon us.. ..pick up ur pen and paper..life will be very beautiful...
A very sad and touching poem narrating the great grief of the unfortunate. Congrats for it's selection as member poem of the Day.