Friday, August 9, 2013

Distraught Comments

Rating: 4.3

There come some moments in our mundane lives,
Laden with whims and emotions of the wrong kinds,
When everything seems distraught and disarrayed,
Everything gets murky, and we feel so dismayed.
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Khairul Ahsan
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Lasoaphia Quxazs 04 July 2017

Yes this is life until we find that what happens to us we caused it unknowingly, because that is our lesson in life and just go ahead and learn, face and do our best to solve it. That is the reason for us in life, and we will have until we are here, because life is not a destination, but only a journey.. Very interesting thoughts.

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Khairul Ahsan 16 May 2018

@Lasoaphia Quxazs, 'Life is not a destination but only a journey' - so wonderfully said! Heard this oft quoted sentence many a time; every time I hear it, I agree to it and think over it. Happy to have you on board! Thanks for appreciating my thoughts and sharing yours. Stay well and Blessed!

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Khairul Ahsan 27 March 2014

@Valsa George, Thank you very much for your elaborate comments on my poem. I am highly elated. Although you are a Professor, you do not seem to be absent minded. I am happy that yet you liked my dedication. 'Who are we to question the divine dispensation..? ' - Yes, wondering indeed who we are! Thanks for interpreting the poem so beautifully. The last part of your comment is also an icing on the whole.

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Valsa George 22 March 2014

Your dedication of this poem to all absent minded professors drew my attention...! I feel the tensions in life plus the age factor leave one absent minded! More people of this current times suffer from this absent mindedness than before. At times we feel so elated.... at times so down and distraught.... sometimes sailing along with the clouds in self abandon... sometimes unable recollect even a very familiar name.... moods and stages change! But we have to go on in life's drama, trying to act our part as best as we can...! That's all we can do! Who are we to question the divine dispensation..? A very lucid picture of the mental decay that affects us with age and under certain situations! The last stanza is like an icing on the cake... Top marks!

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Khairul Ahsan 07 February 2014

@Beauteous Victory, Thanks for your generous words, which I gladly acknowledge. Thanks for liking the note too!

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Khairul Ahsan 07 December 2013

@Aqua Flower, Thank you very much for your comment. So glad to know you could relate to the poem.

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Khairul Ahsan 07 December 2013

@Goldheart Bird, Thank you very much for loving my poem. And thanks for your generous 10/10.

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Khairul Ahsan 07 December 2013

@ary Forrester, Thank you very much for reading my poem and leaving your thoughtful comment here. You have inspired me truly.

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Goldheart Bird 04 September 2013

Love this poem Mr.Ahsan! 10/10! Very beutiful

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Mary Forrester 02 September 2013

I particularly like this poem as it shows the fragility in all of us. A good poem Khairul.

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Khairul Ahsan 18 August 2013

@Arabella, Thanks a lot.

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Arabella Picken 18 August 2013

Really well said, Great! :)

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Khairul Ahsan 13 August 2013

Thanks Elena, you are generous!

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Elena Plotkin 13 August 2013

Masterful. 10 Plus.

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Khairul Ahsan 12 August 2013

Thanks Josephine. I am glad you liked it.

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Josephine Alexis-hagues 12 August 2013

I love this poem! ..those of us of a certain age can really relate to this.

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Khairul Ahsan 11 August 2013

Thanks, Samantha and Akshaya for reading my poem and commenting on it.

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Samanthia Moore 09 August 2013

There are moments in life, when nothing seems right which can discourage many. Perfect! ! ! Well said.

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