The emotions deep inside me begin to whirl up within
As the images of the past sweep by my mind
Shadows of deadly betrayal imprison my brain
And impressions of shattered faith is left behind
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Another song sung in a deep emotional way, but music flows thro' every line. The poetic style shows excellence.
This is very touching Anu. So much of pain in it. Hope things are okay. Keep up your good work.
A Good thoughtly worded poem of an youngster with a matured mind.Just change this sentence'For sorrow and pain are now friends of mine' to 'For sorrow and pain are now enemies of mine'.Hats off to you Anu. Get going to the heights of poetic hill with your tender heart of late teen.
This is beautiful, packed full of emotion and feeling. DK