Thursday, August 29, 2019

Distinctive From Other Birds Comments

Rating: 5.0

I see them often though not every day
The whistling blackbird sized birds of brown and gray
From wooded places never far away
Near where trees and bushes are they like to stay
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Francis Duggan
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Sylvia Frances Chan 29 August 2019

Excellent end rhymes in all stanzas. Well narrated and I have enjoyed very much, Francis! Impressive poem. A 10 Full Score for this lovely poem.

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Jazib Kamalvi 29 August 2019

Very impressive write, Francis Duggan. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 August 2019

Birds ever attract poetic vision. They motivate us with broad sense. Small frogs and insects dance. You have perceived nature with wonderful vision. An amazing poem is excellently penned.

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