Friday, February 7, 2014

Distant Spaces Comments

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A father figure,
always had me looking up.
Oblivious to so many things,
only love filled my cup.
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Karan Patade
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Jrpr Ray 07 February 2014

Hi Karan, Lovely piece. Made me think of my own father gone 15 years now and my own daughter now grown and not a little girl anymore. Keep posting your work and I'll watch for more. And yes, I believe he would understand. ~jrpr

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