…… Distant Shores Comments

I wanted to invite the death discreetly while praising the life and listening to birds without dropping the history from my crooked fingers. Between yourself and myself a sea was surreptitiously raging. The waves were dividing the shores. The two best stanzas I have ever come across... Loved them. Felt the inner sorrows of some separation... Deeply touchy and nice work Sir. Many thanks for the poem. It deserves 10.

Very nice indeed. Beautiful use of descriptive language and metaphor.

wonderfully written, quite stimulating. Readers shall run out of words of praise, as each of your poem is a marvel.........pls read my poem called CAN I BE A POET TOO?

Simply riveting. To think death discreet and wish its invite as such is beautifully said. Excellent.

Varma ji, your poems are great. I enjoy reading them. Thanks and keep on writing.

Great communion with nature!

you're a stimulating writer. keep on SusxGLx