Sunday, February 26, 2006

Distant Shore Comments

Rating: 5.0

She walks alone on the moonlit beach
Her feet slide in the ever-yielding sand
(It is the only thing in her life that gives) .
The waves wait anxiously, calling her,
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Martin Patrick McCarthy
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***** ********* 26 February 2006

Wonderful imagery Martin, I was sucked in by the first wave. A beautiful approach to phenomenum of love. Excellent work. 10 from, beach loving Tai

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