Wednesday, July 31, 2013

Distant Shore Comments

Rating: 5.0

O could it be that we have known
Such tender love before -
That we have loved each other so
Upon some distant shore.
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Valerie Dohren
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Om Chawla 29 August 2013

Stunningly beautiful, lyrical.

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Yasmin Khan 15 August 2013

Love is eternal and immortal as human soul as God Himself is. A lovely write.

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Mary Forrester 13 August 2013

Beautiful poem Valerie, emotional.

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Ramesh Rai 12 August 2013

a beautiful write on immortal love. a perfect poem with emotion n heart write. we are writing so many poems out of all very few are such which can be considered as complete poem. so many times we pour so many unidentified words which deface the poem. in your poem i m obzerving selection of word is marginal expressed as if you took the help of your heart bcoz heart is never mischievous.

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Kelvin Owusu 09 August 2013

a beautiful poem very touching

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Juan Olivarez 07 August 2013

Beautiful work. I read it to Elvira. Absolutely beautiful

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G.R. Gaus 06 August 2013

Soul Mates for eternity, somehow in ways we can't understand in this mortal life you've captured this truth, another beautiful passionate piece of work Valerie...

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Heather Wilkins 05 August 2013

a beautiful love poem. very touching and emotional write

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Smoky Hoss 04 August 2013

Absolutely beautiful and pure poetry. Should be used as an excellent example of what poetry should, and could be. Wonderful thought expressed in the finest possible words.

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Shahzia Batool 03 August 2013

Eye-catching title, and sincere write! ! !

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 02 August 2013

Two hearts united through eternity. That's what love is. Sweet poem.

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Valsa George 02 August 2013

This is such a remarkable poem Val! I just love it! ! In some previous birth.... On some distant shores.... some light years before.... you must have been lovers! Great imagination! !

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Lyn Paul 02 August 2013

Dear valerie, your romance is so good you should be looking at a magazine column. I know our love won't die Thank you

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Kevin Patrick 01 August 2013

Two hearts united through all time, Into eternity. You kill the cynic in my bosom with an arrow of enchantment, love rises in the corpse of bitterness. Thank you

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David Wood 01 August 2013

A beautiful love poem Val, I enjoyed every word.

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Lorraine Colon 01 August 2013

Nothing as beautiful as a love poem {except love itself} - and you know how to write them. Wonderful poem, Val.

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Sandra Feldman 31 July 2013

Went right through me, felt every word, every line, every sentiment of love that flowed from your verses. Speaking about Romantic........ someone got the prize.

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R.j. Wynn 31 July 2013

Somebody was having a great time. I relate to this.

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Heather Wilkins 31 July 2013

a beautiful love poem full of emotions I love the last two stanzas perfect closing of poem. nice work

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Hazel Durham 31 July 2013

A beautiful, romantic poem with great rhythm and flow!

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