O could it be that we have known
Such tender love before -
That we have loved each other so
Upon some distant shore.
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Love is eternal and immortal as human soul as God Himself is. A lovely write.
a beautiful write on immortal love. a perfect poem with emotion n heart write. we are writing so many poems out of all very few are such which can be considered as complete poem. so many times we pour so many unidentified words which deface the poem. in your poem i m obzerving selection of word is marginal expressed as if you took the help of your heart bcoz heart is never mischievous.
Soul Mates for eternity, somehow in ways we can't understand in this mortal life you've captured this truth, another beautiful passionate piece of work Valerie...
Absolutely beautiful and pure poetry. Should be used as an excellent example of what poetry should, and could be. Wonderful thought expressed in the finest possible words.
Two hearts united through eternity. That's what love is. Sweet poem.
This is such a remarkable poem Val! I just love it! ! In some previous birth.... On some distant shores.... some light years before.... you must have been lovers! Great imagination! !
Dear valerie, your romance is so good you should be looking at a magazine column. I know our love won't die Thank you
Two hearts united through all time, Into eternity. You kill the cynic in my bosom with an arrow of enchantment, love rises in the corpse of bitterness. Thank you
Nothing as beautiful as a love poem {except love itself} - and you know how to write them. Wonderful poem, Val.
Went right through me, felt every word, every line, every sentiment of love that flowed from your verses. Speaking about Romantic........ someone got the prize.
a beautiful love poem full of emotions I love the last two stanzas perfect closing of poem. nice work
Stunningly beautiful, lyrical.