Monday, September 19, 2011

Distant Memories Comments

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It's strange to think that one moment you're young,
And the next you're wrinkled, your song unsung.
Precious moments fly by at a blink,
And realising the life you've wasted, you just sink.
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Daniel Sims
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Adeline Foster 14 February 2012

Interesting. I like your effort. Read mine - How Long is Forever - Adeline

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Stefanie Fontker 19 September 2011

I'm in love with the first stanza of this poem, Beautiful, just beautiful.

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Daniel Sims

Daniel Sims

Aylesbury, England
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