Tuesday, September 16, 2008

Distant Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

She lives so far away,
On a shore where a different ocean sprays
An island so different from this land
Yet more enticing for me to leave and make a stand
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Linda Winchell 18 November 2008

Nothing draws two hearts closer than distance in between each beat. Ten! Linda

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iL-**Hazen.Winckler**- 16 September 2008

well...it's ONE OF THE BEST POEM! ! I...EVER READ! i LVOE it! ! it has great rythm, beat, such a GREAT verse! ! ! ! it's WonDERFULL! ! it's a 10...for me! ! LOVE IT! ! !

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