Distant Lights Comments

Elegant and mysterious, like a contained passion but composed with a very versatile pen.

Still...'It remained undisclosed forever'. Shadakshari.Tarabenahalli.

the way you touch the feelings and emote them.....splendid! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

All lights are within, seema....... ! ! ! DISTANT LIGHTS...? ? ?

hi seema its a beautiful poem... great imagery and allegory did a beautiful poem there, , , enjoyed reading it cheers and ten

With the exception of 'conjugal knot; the rest of poem is filled with romance. Had you offered some coffee on that 'gloomy evening', I would have loved it more.10