Tuesday, December 2, 2014

Distant Dream Comments

Rating: 5.0

Distant Dream
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Among celestial airs
Heard her quiet moaning
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DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK
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Akhtar Jawad 03 December 2014

That someone holds her heart to ransom Though she loved him so truly and madly Could crush it with unkind gesture Deepak I was moved with the beauty of this work of art, what a poem, one of the best from you! .......10

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Salini Nair 03 December 2014

loss of love.greatest pain on earth.... very nicely written......

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Valsa George 03 December 2014

The pangs of a lovelorn heart poignantly pictured! When she finds her love being rejected, a dark shadow falls over her life and she falls into a kind of depressive gloom! A moving portrait!

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