Wednesday, November 30, 2005

Distant, But Not Forgotten Comments

Rating: 4.4

When I think of you so far away
Across that stretch of sea,
I cannot help but wonder if
Sometimes you think of me.
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Jon Lloyd
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Barb VM 17 April 2007

Melanie Agua is right... it's a poem everybdy can relate to -I think-... Good job! Love it!

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Michelle Tiddy 19 March 2007

The physical may not be attainable, but the memories cannot be erased.... Oh! Unless Eternal Sunshine of the Spotless Mind gets us! ! ! I loved this...made me smile wryly at moments forgotten.

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Melanie Emiko 08 March 2007

Maybe at least once in every man or woman's life is a story like this. Something we can all relate to. There's always that 'one' remembered. ^_^ Good job!

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Katie Lowery 06 March 2007

I love this one. The distance are just spaces, but the love stretches out for miles. That's so true.

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Original Unknown Girl 19 January 2007

Love this Jon, so lovely, 'tis true we only see the worth of the ones we didn't catch! Why is that? Nice tribute to love..... HG: -) xx

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Aldo Kraas 05 January 2007

It reminds me of somebody that died Yes the sea is a long strech From the road Yes this poem is indeed beautiful

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Declan McHenry 30 November 2005

From the surface of the sea how many fish can one see? Ah, the ones that get away, How unlike the ones that stay?

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