Sunday, January 29, 2017

Distances Comments

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I don't want to see You,
I don't want to touch You,
let me feel You from a distance,
let me believe You are beautiful,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 30 January 2017

Dear God come more close to me, so that, I am in You, and You are in me! I see You are beautiful. Really, really loved these beautiful lines of your poem, Jawad sahab! 10++++++++

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Bharati Nayak 30 January 2017

Finding reflections of God in your heart, you are truly in love.A great write, thanks for sharing.

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Nice to read, Nice to sing, Melodious.

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Rajnish Manga 30 January 2017

Mun tu shudam tu mun shudi, mun tun shudam tu jaan shudi Taakas na guyad baad azeen, mun deegaram tu deegari (Hazrat Amir Khusrau) I have become you, you have become me, I have become life, you have become body; From now on, let no one say that I am other and you are another. (Traslation is by Khushwant Singh)

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Rajnish Manga 30 January 2017

Lovely philosophical poem with a narrative befitting a Sufi. Thanks for sharing. I quote: What should I do to create a distance? Should I get rid of love?

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Khalida Bano Ali 29 January 2017

A thoughtful poem on God, yes, God is inside us..........................................

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