Tuesday, October 20, 2009

Distance Blurs. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Windswept, my heart,
................ now bleeding with wait, sees
The same grey dawn wake
................................... another new day
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Fay Slimm
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Gordon Wilkinson 03 November 2009

wonderful - no need to say anything else

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Sonya Florentino 28 October 2009

tears blur the vision as memories soak the mind..... (sniffle!)

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Bob Gibson 21 October 2009

Our world is a window, in the passage of time there is no rhyme or reason there is no we or mine! loves passions are truly torn from my heart no man on earth can keep us apart

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Tsira Goge 20 October 2009

....................... Rain will help me forget How your sunshine turned .................... cartwheels of love around My every day once. ............................................................ it's so fine, Fay 10... Kindest regards, Tsira

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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