Tuesday, October 11, 2011

Distance - Between Comments

Rating: 4.9

There is a
Distance.
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Smoky Hoss
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Joseph Anderson 08 March 2014

Smoky -this is a free verse style that gets something said, with profound utterance. Makes a fellow pause and think. The distance from here to eternity ia all to short- a great write

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Shadow Girl 15 October 2011

a distance as far or as close as you let it be..nice write. -SG

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Patti Masterman 12 October 2011

I saw a line in a poem that went something like, 'your heart is so close but I'm bleeding across the space separating us' and it blew me away. I think your poem contains a hidden mystical truth about space's secret effects upon the human being. He was not made to deal with huge spaces. He began life in a room that was only mere inches across. (smile)

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