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a distance as far or as close as you let it be..nice write. -SG
I saw a line in a poem that went something like, 'your heart is so close but I'm bleeding across the space separating us' and it blew me away. I think your poem contains a hidden mystical truth about space's secret effects upon the human being. He was not made to deal with huge spaces. He began life in a room that was only mere inches across. (smile)
Smoky -this is a free verse style that gets something said, with profound utterance. Makes a fellow pause and think. The distance from here to eternity ia all to short- a great write