Wednesday, July 9, 2014

Distance And Time Comments

Rating: 4.8

There is a road not covered here
That lays upon the shadow land
Continues for a thousand years
Prepared before the breaking dawn
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Tom Squires
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Lungelo S Mbuyazi 17 May 2018

Wonderful piece of artwork...I could read it many times in a low tone..10+

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Noreen Carden 03 December 2014

Tom you take the reader on a journey a beautifully written journey

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Roseann Shawiak 29 October 2014

You definitely have a rhythmic flow to your poem, it's soothing, lilting song takes us along, dancing to your tune. Imagery is superb, I can hear the feet stepping on the cobblestones within my mind. Very unique style you have, I love it. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Ramesh Rai 21 September 2014

Beautiful write with a smooth flow of ink.

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Adeline Foster 18 July 2014

That is good, has a Robert Frost flavor. Read mine - Frost Flowers - Adeline

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