Monday, December 13, 2004

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If I ever walked on fields they smelled like you.
A further dream to lie on grass and eat
and wonder if you sniffed a strand of hair aired
out in the summer sun like a sheet
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Morgan Upridge Thompson
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***** ***** 06 May 2005

You have a wonderful style, I wasn't aware of this poem but I will be keeping a keen eye out for your next offerings....

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Debi Cimo 24 April 2005

This piece echoes. Well written-Debi

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