Tuesday, July 9, 2019

Distance Comments

Rating: 5.0

You are sitting at a distance,
Afraid to come to me?
How distant have you gone
When you pervade my whole being?
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Bharati Nayak
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Nabakishore Dash 12 November 2021

No distance when u are in love with any body. Nice to read.

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Edward Kofi Louis 07 September 2019

" Afraid to come to me" ! 🤗🎻✒💡 Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Indira Renganathan 11 August 2019

Soulful expression...indeed a touching poem....thank you Bharati

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Akhtar Jawad 08 August 2019

A loved one sitting at a distance but for the souls distances are meaningless. A nice thought so nicely presented in a touching poem.

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Bharati Nayak 08 August 2019

Thank you Akhtar Jawad ji for your kind review.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 24 July 2019

When you and me interchange souls Last night I left the world gaping in my dream soulful poetry I composed you may read me AN AWAKENING do read it please ......but in the hearts and minds left far behind in those who still dwell in the liveliest of Paradise they remember me who else will

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Bharati Nayak 22 July 2019

Dear readers, I am grateful for your great reviews on my poem.Due to various factors I am unable to reply your comments which I always love to do.My heartfelt thanks to you all for reading my poems and encouraging me through your wonderful comments.

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A soul talk so touching! Your poems have a soul stirring quality. I wish i could read your Odia poems as well. A sure 10

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 21 July 2019

What a wonderful poem. A very touching write that captures the essence of love. No amount of distance can affect the love we felt for our beloved. The love and care we have for them will close the gap between us. And remembering will make them nearer to us. Beautifully written. Onto my Poem List.

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When you and me interchange souls all distance become no distance. Great

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When you and me interchangesouls all distance become no distance. Great and true. There is no distance between two loving hearts....10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 July 2019

When you and me interchange souls All distance become no distance, ......so touching with best concept. A beautiful poem on love and life is aptly executed.Thank you dear mdam for sharing this gem with us.

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Aniruddha Pathak 11 July 2019

Close proximity brings hearts together, it may breed contempt as the wisdom says, But two souls separated by distance come closer. A nicely penned piece.

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Bharati Nayak 12 July 2019

Thank you Annirudh Pathakji for your kind appreciation.

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