You are sitting at a distance,
Afraid to come to me?
How distant have you gone
When you pervade my whole being?
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" Afraid to come to me" ! 🤗🎻✒💡 Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Soulful expression...indeed a touching poem....thank you Bharati
A loved one sitting at a distance but for the souls distances are meaningless. A nice thought so nicely presented in a touching poem.
When you and me interchange souls Last night I left the world gaping in my dream soulful poetry I composed you may read me AN AWAKENING do read it please ......but in the hearts and minds left far behind in those who still dwell in the liveliest of Paradise they remember me who else will
Dear readers, I am grateful for your great reviews on my poem.Due to various factors I am unable to reply your comments which I always love to do.My heartfelt thanks to you all for reading my poems and encouraging me through your wonderful comments.
A soul talk so touching! Your poems have a soul stirring quality. I wish i could read your Odia poems as well. A sure 10
What a wonderful poem. A very touching write that captures the essence of love. No amount of distance can affect the love we felt for our beloved. The love and care we have for them will close the gap between us. And remembering will make them nearer to us. Beautifully written. Onto my Poem List.
When you and me interchange souls all distance become no distance. Great
When you and me interchangesouls all distance become no distance. Great and true. There is no distance between two loving hearts....10
When you and me interchange souls All distance become no distance, ......so touching with best concept. A beautiful poem on love and life is aptly executed.Thank you dear mdam for sharing this gem with us.
Close proximity brings hearts together, it may breed contempt as the wisdom says, But two souls separated by distance come closer. A nicely penned piece.
No distance when u are in love with any body. Nice to read.