You are sitting at a distance,
Afraid to come to me?
How distant have you gone
When you pervade my whole being?
When you and me interchange souls
All distance become no distance,
And all tears turn into pearls,
Oh Dear, remember me, when you are worn out,
Be sure that my soul is ever with you.
Dear readers, I am grateful for your great reviews on my poem.Due to various factors I am unable to reply your comments which I always love to do.My heartfelt thanks to you all for reading my poems and encouraging me through your wonderful comments.
A soul talk so touching! Your poems have a soul stirring quality. I wish i could read your Odia poems as well. A sure 10
No distance when u are in love with any body. Nice to read.
" Afraid to come to me" ! 🤗🎻✒💡 Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Soulful expression...indeed a touching poem....thank you Bharati
A loved one sitting at a distance but for the souls distances are meaningless. A nice thought so nicely presented in a touching poem.
When you and me interchange souls Last night I left the world gaping in my dream soulful poetry I composed you may read me AN AWAKENING do read it please ......but in the hearts and minds left far behind in those who still dwell in the liveliest of Paradise they remember me who else will
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Close proximity brings hearts together, it may breed contempt as the wisdom says, But two souls separated by distance come closer. A nicely penned piece.
Thank you Annirudh Pathakji for your kind appreciation.