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Have to agree with Marci here, this poem is so very lovely. The emotions are very controlled for one so young but I guess that doesn't mean it's not so.. You convey your thoughts beautifully. Most eloquent penning. HG: -) xx

I've got to tell you that I read this and then your bio and then the poem again. This is a beautiful and romantic piece full of longing, devotion and passion...It's difficult to fathom one only 15 writing so sincerely and sounding so experienced of how the heart yearns and needs to be 'one' with their one and only...I will be interested to see others comments for this write is light years ahead of the emotions of a 15 year old, if a girl and if a boy even further away....Emotions as mature as one whose been through love and it's longing and can put it in words so well...Bravo, a lovely poem.~~~~~~marci. :)