Monday, August 28, 2006

Distance Comments

Rating: 5.0

How these streets
Of busy people,
White-lighted, foolish
Proximity, never see each
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Kelly Vinal
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Nimal Dunuhinga 07 September 2006

A laudable poem and there is no any calibration for the distance?

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Geoff Warden 07 September 2006

Amazing the things we see if we know to look......great poem

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Patrick Ladbrooke 06 September 2006

Excellent poem, as a poem and also for the message. What is becoming of us? I'm glad someone noticed! Excellent comment on today's street life. Patrick

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Gabriella Franco 06 September 2006

love the imagery! ! wonderful

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Cecil (cj) Krieger 01 September 2006

Wonderful visions in word, , , I ca see the picture you paint… a 10 Kelly!

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Leo Lopes 28 August 2006

Hey nice imagery in this one exellent work

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Kelly Vinal

Kelly Vinal

Homestead, Florida
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