Thursday, January 27, 2022

Distance Comments

Rating: 5.0

Yes, I didn't come here; I didn't touch this soft body
I didn't consume the wine where you were sleepy
It's a long grassy lawn; splendid roof of the violet sky
Where the bed of roses kissed the bared lusty eyes
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MAHTAB BANGALEE
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BRITTE NINAD 13 February 2022

nicely crafted this loving poem

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Moore Noore 08 February 2022

superb and lovely romantic poem penned; it contains full of your romantic feeling. Distance should not create distance.

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Sultan Deen 07 February 2022

Distance makes thick the love between you and your beloved; penned awesome; I love it

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 06 February 2022

Wonderful poetic expressions with compelling images.

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