Sunday, December 22, 2013

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I have fallen madly in love with you these last four months,
It’s a feeling that won’t be easy to shake.
But this distance that stands between us
Can’t help but make my heart ache.
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Melody Stargaze
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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 22 December 2013

Wow an appealing emotive poem. U rhymed it so wondrful. Its natural to feel insecure before commitment. Why dont u mary? Pls review my latest poem.

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